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SURGE - Chapter 1Chapter 1Today is one of those days where you run around in circles. It’s repeating business, but it will be all over soon. Today is also against Mordecai’s mood, it’s a warm afternoon, still sunny with flowing breezes.“I’m late.” Mordecai roughly whispers to himself while walking to his car. His car isn’t too far away, but isn’t too close. He walks aside a street-full of passing cars on an empty sidewalk. Streetlights turn on, headlights turned on. Mordecai walks into an obstacle. He’s troubled at the thought of yesterday and frowns at tomorrow's coming problems. But he continued to walk through it. He shoves himself in his car again; taking off at the road. And he goes to remember things too. Like getting a coffee with a friend.“Hey, man!” Rigby says surprised. “I was kinda waiting for you to get here.” Rigby says. “You didn’t need to wait for me, dude.” Mordecai sa
SURGE Demo fanfic (spoilers)Mordecai dashes through the corridor after Cerberus chases close behind. He turns left at a doorway and finds a safe place in a dark room to hide just long enough. A dozen of policemen run past the room. “Four shots until I’m screwed.” Mordecai thought and picked the first syringe off of his belt, and shot his arm. “One minute until I’m ready, five hours until it wears off.” He stays flat on the wall and quiet. “I haven’t seen any of my friends since I ran.” Mordecai thought. “Did Cerberus get them?” A few gunshots rang out; then a bang. Electric crackles. “Shit, that’s Eric!” Mordecai leaped from his spot, and started down the corridor towards the noise.He collided with someone, he and another person fall onto the ground.A gunshot flash quickly followed by more. The policeman’s gun was pointed in the wrong direction. Mordecai punches the policeman’s chest, and the man falls. He wrestled t