SURGE - Chapter 3Chapter 3--[Rigby is walking back to the Park HQ(Rigby): What’s up with Mordecai…[Rigby]**Takes HQ keys and opens the front doors[Rigby]**Opens the front door, and walks to the kitchen(Rigby): He’s so sensitive about his stupid paper and job. I mean, only know his job’s schedule. Well, I did piss him off pretty good when I told him I read that stupid paper.[Rigby]**Rigby makes a turn towards the Kitchen room(Rigby): I think he’s trying to be secretive about it. I don’t know if I should keep my respect about that.(Rigby): I mean, he’s too secretive about things now.(Rigby): He should let me in sometimes… I don’t know..(Rigby): And I think he’s already stressed out by that job.(Rigby): I just don’t know what’s his job is about.[Rigby]**Sits down at the Kitchen Table(Rigby): I know Mordecai hasn’t been himself
SURGE - Chapter 2Chapter 2^WARNING^ Mild language is used[Mordecai]**Runs to his car, takes out his car keys and unlocks it, and enters it[Mordecai]**Checks his watch, and it reads: 7:53[Mordecai]**Mordecai slams his right wrist against the steering wheel, and says: Damn it![Mordecai]: I’m not going to have enough time!(Mordecai): I’m so late!(Mordecai): Do I even have the directions to get there!?! **Mordecai then looks around in his glovebox.--[Mordecai’s Glove Box contains a special briefcase, a bunch of papers, receipts, two speeding tickets, and a pistol**Mordecai shifts around in the papers, and puts those he checked on the passenger's seat.(Mordecai): I’m going to need to put my pistol somewhere else...[Rigby]**says from outside the car: MORDECAI![Mordecai] **Mordecai crams the checked papers back into the glove box, especially over the gun.[Rigby]: What’s wrong with you? What are y
SURGE - Chapter 1--little note: “(name)” are thoughts from that person, "((name))" are whispers from that person, “[name]” are spoken words, “**actions” are actions, "--action" are sequences, and "name" are perspective changes.SURGECHAPTER 1--[Setting in Mordecai’s car waiting outside the Coffee Cafe at late evening. First panel is a scene where Mordecai parks his car in a parking lot--[Mordecai’s car is a 1968 Firebird with a custom paintjob, and interior(Mordecai): Okay, Rigby’s Birthday is in a few more days… I still don’t know what to do.(Mordecai): I wouldn’t know what to do anyway.(Mordecai): Maybe I can surprise him. Or maybe I just need to ask him what he wants.(Mordecai): I’ll just have to get him something like...(Mordecai): Like a coffee?(Mordecai)*Turns to look at the Cafe, and back to staring at the steering wheel,
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